Dear Bobalishakazammeowmoonyanrawromgwhyisthisnamesolong,
Hello, Bobalishakazammeowmoonyanrawromgwhyisthisnamesolong. Today seems like a fantastic day to write a letter to you. Due to the lack of things to do in my house, I decided to write a letter to you since I have not seen you in a very long time. Also, I would like to thank you for sending me that amazing christmas present last year, i've always wanted a bottle of deodorant.
I didn't go anywhere during the holidays. But surely, you know that I never go out during the holidays. During the holidays, I spent majority of my time slacking. I composed some electronic music, played games, played games, and did I mention play games? I don't know where all the time went. I remember telling myself that i was going to have the most productive holiday break ever. Well, I was wrong.
School started recently and due to this year being the year of the fearful exam some call "SPM", my parents have been pressuring me to study like there's no tomorrow. As a form 5 student, we don't really have time for anything due to the fact that we are given a somewhat endless pile of homework and we are tempted with devices that provide entertainment, namely the computer and the TV.
On the first day of school, we were given a speech by the teachers of SMKDJ. After the speech had ended, we walked to our class and were happy that we managed to see most of our friends again. Everyone in our form 4 class was present in our form 5 class. As we were enjoying the chat that we had with our fellow classmates, our teacher had arrived in the classroom. Being such an amazing teacher, she provided us with some homework after class. The rest of the day was somewhat similar to what I had just stated, the teachers were early and for every subject, there was homework. The next few days of school was very similar to the first day of school, except we were confronted with different teachers.
I'm hoping that the next week of school will be less stressful and hopefully, the teachers will take it easy on us and mellow down on the amount of homework they give. That's about all I have to write, I hope to see a reply from you, even though you are just a figment of my imagination. Take care.
-Brandon
Continue posting, Brandon. With practice you'll be able to find ideas easily. You already have a nice flow.
ReplyDeleteSome errors:
* I spent (the) majority of my time slacking.
* After the speech had ended, (After the speech)
* our teacher had (no need had) arrived in the classroom
* to what I had (have) just stated
* except(that) we were confronted (what do you mean? is there a better word?) with (by) different teachers.
* the teachers will take it easy on us and mellow down on the amount of homework they give (the teachers will mellow out and go easy on the amount of homework they dish out)-does this sound better?